I think that is absolutely excellent Derek,
I'm puzzled by one thing - I tried to copy your curves to see what was going on, and I noticed that I could not get the histograms to be anything like yours (see below), especially the red and green channels - so I guess you did at least 3 passes. The first to lighten, then RGB, then Lab - is that right?
I had this problem on the course where I could not get my histograms to look like other people's - Mike suggested the difference between precise mode being on/off.
Does anybody else have this problem with histogram representation?
Thanks
Chris